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You balled your hand into a fist, knocking it against the door to the house in front of you a couple times. The house belonged to your best friend, Kiku Honda, who had called you earlier asking if you'd like to come over today. Of course you said yes, you loved spending time with the calm Japanese man. You both had similar interests in many things, so it was fun to hang out with him, because you could actually do things that both of you enjoyed. You'll admit, you've also had a crush on him since you'd first met, and it continues to grow every time you're around him. Recently, you'd even convinced yourself that it must be love that you felt for him now, with as long as you've liked him and continue to do so. It really was a wonderful feeling to have.

You knocked on the door a few more times after he still hadn't answered, beginning to worry that something might've happened. After awhile longer you couldn't stand it anymore, and attempted to open the door. To your surprise, it opened easily, and you were able to slip inside easily. You felt a little bad and nervous about entering his home without permission, but the feelings went away quickly as you scanned the room.

You'd always liked Kikus house, it seemed to give off a calming aura inside, just like Kiku himself seemed to always give off. You looked around the room briefly, in search for him, if he was home anyways. Your scanning stopped as you spotted the couch. Kiku was on it, laying down, face-up, with Pochi curled up near his feet asleep. He appeared to be sleeping, still dressed in his work clothes too. You guessed he must've had a long day if he had passed out in the couch still dressed up like that.

You stopped to take off your shoes first, then walked over to the couch as quietly as you could manage, sitting down on your knees in front of where his head rested on the couch. He looked really cute asleep to be honest, especially right now, with his head tilted to the side a little and his lips parted slightly. You watched him for awhile, just thinking about how peaceful he seemed at that moment. Pochi woke up from his nap then, noticing you right away and letting out a bark, hopping off the couch and pattering over to you, tail wagging furiously. You took your index finger and placed it over your mouth, letting out a soft 'Shh'.

"Kikus sleeping." You whispered to the little white dog. Pochi just cocked his head to one side, his tail still wagging rapidly. You let out a small chuckle and petted his head before turning back to Kiku. He suddenly started shifting slightly, muttering something in Japanese for a second before going quiet again. You giggled in amusement at his unconscious action, then focused back onto him fully, listening to his steady breathing.

A certain story popped into your head just then. Sleeping Beauty. The story of a princess being cursed or something and falling into a deep sleep, and the prince coming and kissing her, breaking the horrible spell and freeing her from her slumber, and then the two living happily ever after and such. Of course, you'd only seen the Disney version of it, and you had heard that the real story was quite different and, honestly, it didn't sound very happy from what people told you. You liked the Disney version though, and was thinking about how this could be like that story, except that would mean Kiku would be the princess, and you would be the prince, and he wasn't under some spell, he was just exhausted and had passed out on the couch. You laughed quietly at your own odd imagination, wondering why you imagined these things in the first place.

As you watched him more, you began to wonder what it'd be like to kiss him in his sleep. Would he wake up if you did? Really it all  depended on how asleep he was, and whether he was a light sleeper or deep sleeper. If he woke up, well, you weren't sure what he would do either, but you knew you'd be horribly embarrassed and might even have troubles facing him. Still, the idea wouldn't get off your mind, and the more you watched him, the more you wanted to do it. I mean, he was in just the right position really, his head tilted so that it faced you, and his lips still parted perfectly. It was as if he was unconsciously asking to be kissed right now, which you knew was not true at all.

You continued to watch him, mentally arguing with yourself on whether you should kiss him or not. You only realized you'd been leaning in ever so slightly towards him until you were just barely an inch away from his lips, able to feel his breath on your own. You stayed that way for a moment, making a final decision. You wanted to. You really, really wanted to kiss him. You closed your eyes and before you could change your mind, softly pressed your lips to his. You felt your face burning, aware that what you were doing would make him freak if he were awake, but didn't pull away just yet. You kept your lips pressed against his in a kiss for only a few seconds before breaking away. You opened your eyes back up slowly, only to make eye contact with a widened pair of chocolate brown ones.

Kiku had woke up.

You felt your entire face flush immediately, staring at him, who was now awake, wide eyed and face colored a deep scarlet red. You felt so embarrassed you could feel yourself tearing up.

"I-I-I'm s-so sorry Kiku!" You stuttered, covering your mouth with your hand. He didn't do anything, just stayed the way he was, most likely in complete and utter shock at what had just happened to him. You were so embarrassed, you couldn't stand staying. You quickly got up, bolting for the door and running out as fast as you could. Behind you you heard him call out for you, followed by a loud crash, then the door being opened hastily and him running after you in an attempt to catch up to you. You ran even faster, not wanting to face him in fear of what might happen. Turns out he was faster than you'd anticipated, easily catching up to you and grabbing your arm, stopping you abruptly. You didn't look at him, instead covered your face with your hands. He turned you around so that you faced towards him, you keeping your face firmly buried into your hands, not daring to look at him.

"_____-"

"I'm so, so sorry Kiku, I don't know what came over me, you just looked so cute asleep and I just-" you were interrupted by him suddenly wrapping his arms around you and pulling you into a firm hug. You let out a small gasp, surprised at the unexpected action.

"It's okay _____, you just surprised me, that's all." He assured softly, loosening slightly but not letting go.

"B-But I invaded your personal space..." You countered, massively confused.

"If it's you I don't mind." He responded. You blinked a couple of times, trying to process everything at once.

"What do you mean?" You asked quietly after a moment.

"I like you, a lot. I just haven't had the confidence to admit it."

You could feel your heart beating rapidly. Kiku liked you? You shared the same feelings?! You felt your face burning again, feeling extremely happy now, your embarrassment slowly fading away.

"I like you too, a lot! I have for awhile actually, I just didn't have the guts to confess either..." You replied, finally wrapping your arms around his waist and squeezing him. He lightly took your shoulders and pulled you off him so that he could look you in the eyes.

"Just do me a favor?" He asked softly. You looked back at him and nodded.

"Next time you want to kiss me, do it when I'm fully awake."

You chuckled and wrapped your arms around his neck, pulling him towards you and connecting your lips to his again. He pulled you closer to him, and you shared a sweet, passionate kiss together, both of you gaining your long awaited happy endings.
Third of four stories I made while grounded XD
I was a little hesitant to post this, because I think its not one of my best stories, but in the end I decided "eh, why not?" And posted it anyways XD hopefully it's not too bad, hopefully you liked it, and feedback is always appreciated! :D

Only thing that belongs to me is the story, everything else does not.
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EODragonkitty201 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  New member Hobbyist Artist
My Love life right now  Only the first part
But this Reader insert made me happy  

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever? 
Boy: No 
Girl: Do u even like me? 
Boy: No Girl: Would u cry if i walked away? 
Boy: No She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes 
The boy grabbed her arm 
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful 
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever 
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away. 
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me 
Girl: I will... *Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u *Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm *Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!! *Get ready for the shock of your life! *If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have bad luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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AwesomePrussianess Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  New member
Most people aren't sure of what they really want in life. I received this letter

from a friend on the computer, did what it told me to, and within a week,

everything I had wished came true!! Here's an exact copy,

this

really

works!!!!

1. To yourself, say the name of the only guy or girl you wanna be with 3

times!

2. Think of something you wanna accomplish within the next week and say

it to your self 6 times!!

3. If you had 1 wish what would it be? say it to yourself 9 times!!!

4. Think of something that you want to happen between you and that

1special person and say it to your self 12 times!!!

5. Now, heres the hard part! Pick only 1 of these wishes and as you scroll

down focus and concentrate on it and think on nothing else but that wish.

* *

* *

* *

Now make one last & final wish about that one wish that you picked.

After reading this, you have 1 hour to send it out to 15 people, and what

you wished for will come true within in one week!

u only get one chance!!!!! Now scroll down and think of your
crush!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Did you think of your crush? I hope so, that was your last chance. Now

pay very close attention this important message!

Sorry but once read, must be sent. Yes, this is one of those kinda chain
letters that everyone hates. This one has been going since 1864 and if you
break this chain, you will pay!!!!!! Remember that after hearing these
stories.

First Example:

Take Barbra Wallace.. She was a pretty lucky girl, up till she got this same
chain letter. She had a crush on the same kid since kindergarden. when she
got this mail she didn't pay any attention to it. She just thought, no big deal.
And deleted it. The next day her dad got fired and her mom dies in a car
crash. If she would have sent the letter none of that would have happened
and her mom would be alive.

Second Example:

Try Freddie D. Now Freddie D. was your average nerd. Had glasses, was
short and chubby, was in gifted. All the signs of
your total dork. He also received this letter and sent it to 51
people in the hour. Now, like Barbra, he had a crush on a girl since 3rd
grade. The next day after sending the chain the girl confessed her love for
him ever since 3rd grade. Freddie D. finally had the courage to ask her out,
and of course, she had been waiting to yes to that for years. They grew up
and married each other to live happily forever.

Now, you heard the stories. I know which person i'd rather
be, but thats up to you. I wouldn't wanna end up like Barbra but thats only

me. We all want what we cant have but now's ur chance to go out withthat

special somebody ur waiting for. Take it or leave it. If you send this to-

1 person- you will lose all luck in ur love life..... forever!!!!!

10 people- your crush will say they like you as a friend...... ONLY!!!!!

15 people- your crush will say they like you

20 people- your crush will ask you out!

25 people- your crush will kiss you!!

30 people - Your crush will have sex with you

35 people or more- All of the above!!

Don't blow it, it's ur chance to shine! Have everything u wanted, and more!

Now, complaining cus u dont have any
friends. Well theres an answer 4 everything. It's simple, just go in a chat

room, pick some names and send away! but here's the catch..... you only

have 1 hour
if the pain goes on im not gonna make it...!
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Altofox Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*pterodactyl screech*
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shykittyTae Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014   Interface Designer
<3
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xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
Omgomgomgogmogmgogmgomgomg I'm LOVIN in.
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ChocolatMelloFangirl Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Me:*squeals at ending*

Japan: Jinxx-chan what are you reading?

Me:8throws laptop into pool* NOTHING.
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Ray711 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconprincecharmingplz: IMMA GIRL WHOS A PRINCE! WHOOOOOOOOOO! :iconyeahplz:
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thelittlemermello Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SO FLUFFY SO FLUFFY SO FLUFFY SO FLUFFY SO FLUFFY SO FLUFFY 
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YellowVixen Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwww so kawaii~!
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goatgirl210 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Student Writer
PikaPikaGirl23 Oct 13, 2013
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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wolfleopard3301 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I was wondering if reader-chan was going to run out of the house....but Kiku didn't tackle the reader.....*pouts slightly*
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gemsky Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Student Writer
that would have been funny
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wolfleopard3301 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't really take you seriously with that icon.... *dies of laughter* its a good icon. I wish the reader was tackled though..... That would have been hilarious....... Your icon just works perfectly if you're mad at someone....... Need to keep this in mind
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goatgirl210 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Writer
-casually stops kissing the guy I like who was asleep and sees he's not asleep, but instead has his eyes wide open in shock-  :D WOOOOOOW.
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elinaboycheva Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?Boy: NoGirl: Do u even like me?Boy: NoGirl: Would u cry if i walked away?Boy: NoShe heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyesThe boy grabbed her armBoy: Your not pretty...your beautifulBoy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u foreverBoy: I dont like u...I love uBoy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.Boy Whispers: Plz stay with meGirl: I will...*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!*Get ready for the shock of your life!*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
I think it's an awesome story original and romantic 😉
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Altofox Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :D
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
your welcome ;)
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JapanKikuLover Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay.... :D
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014   General Artist
(Me) Im a prince now f*ck yeah!
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angelstien10 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
love it!!!!! :iconloveloveplz:
 good job you wonderful human you!
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sadmac356 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
Just because I thought it was funny when the reader kissed him: +fav 
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Altofox Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icongoodjob-plz:
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Klover-Masquerade Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
PikaPikaGirl23 Oct 13, 2013
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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elinaboycheva Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?Boy: NoGirl: Do u even like me?Boy: NoGirl: Would u cry if i walked away?Boy: NoShe heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyesThe boy grabbed her armBoy: Your not pretty...your beautifulBoy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u foreverBoy: I dont like u...I love uBoy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.Boy Whispers: Plz stay with meGirl: I will...*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!*Get ready for the shock of your life!*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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AmuletAmethyst Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student General Artist
DA!! DAT WAS SO CUTE!!! also, if I found a sleeping Kiku I would take a photo and post it on every social networking site Kiku was on, that way he'll be embarresed! HESSOFREAKINCUTEWHENHEBLUSHES!!
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moemoeiggychan Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
found myself back at one of your stories. they're just so... :iconhandspazzplz:
REALLY cute!
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Altofox Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw, I'm glad you like them~! :3
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PrincessDarknight Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
So kawaii! :3 (I just barely realized that I use some words from the language the county if from xD I'm so strange xD
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Altofox Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks~! XD
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PrincessDarknight Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Lol np
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NinjaNyanKat Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Sleeping Cutie is more like it lol!
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elinaboycheva Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?Boy: NoGirl: Do u even like me?Boy: NoGirl: Would u cry if i walked away?Boy: NoShe heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyesThe boy grabbed her armBoy: Your not pretty...your beautifulBoy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u foreverBoy: I dont like u...I love uBoy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.Boy Whispers: Plz stay with meGirl: I will...*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!*Get ready for the shock of your life!*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student General Artist
D'aaaawwwww~! That was so cute~!
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Altofox Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconjapanisblushing5plz:
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student General Artist
^^
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Witchyeevee Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
me: *squees and fangirls*

Texas: she's been doing this for a WHOLE DAY. on your stories.

me: *frozen in kawaii epicness*

Texas: enjoy the llama....
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Altofox Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw, thank you~! I'm glad you like them! X3
I quite enjoy that llama
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Witchyeevee Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Texas: and she passed out.... *pokes admin* ..... Hey! can i ask a question?
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Altofox Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh dear, she passed out? XD
Ask me a question? Sure :)
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Witchyeevee Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Texas: sugar rush *dismissal wave of hand* just like every night after passing a test or something like that. How do you know Japan so well? 0~0

Witchy:.... *whacks Texas over the head with a wing* IT'S A FANFIC.

Texas: *KO'ed*
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Altofox Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How interesting XD
I know him so well because Im pretty much obsessed with him, and I do my research ;) I know plenty about Japan, more than most people I know seem to...
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Witchyeevee Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Witchy: This personality isn't even going to ask.....

Me: *pops awake for a second and fights back MPD* >~< NYARR! oh and g'night! *Goes back to sleep for tomorrow*

Kras: FOR HETAONIIIIII!!!!!!!
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Altofox Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Goodnight~! XD
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bookgirl21 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Student General Artist
That was totally awesome.
Really, completely awesome.
You're a great writer! :iconiloveit-plz:
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Altofox Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, thank you~! :iconcblushplz:
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Littlesunflower17 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are my favorite author on Deviantart. I love you, and keep it going! :)
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Altofox Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much, I'm honored~! :iconloveloveplz:
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Littlesunflower17 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! <3
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danzis14 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And here's another one. Honestly I didn't know it was you again till I saw who made it. But seriously, you're stories are so amazing! It was soooooooo cute. :iconblushplz:
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